Short Story by a First Grader

Learnhive is running Think n Ink Contest- Creative Writing Contest for kids aged 5 – 15. We have lots of new entries and we’ll be uploading your work here. This is one of the write-up which was uploaded for the Think n Ink Contest. 

Short Story by Aldon Almeida of Grade 1 for Think n Ink Contest

A dog named “Ben”, did not like to go out to the market tied in chains. He did not like to be kept tied.

One day, he was went to the market along with his master just to see the market.

In the market he saw lot of masters who had come along with their dogs who were also tied in chains. He could see the same feel as that of his in their eyes.

Ben had thought he was a lone dog to be tied, but was glad to see so many dogs there, so he barked in a peculiar tone “bow, bow, bow”.

Hearing him bark, all the other dogs began to bark in the same tone.

Now, the market was full of dog bark.

Seeing all this, Ben was happy and to have so many friends who also expressed their discomfort in chains. All the masters let go their dogs for a while. The dogs raced together to the nearby open area and had great fun.

After which they returned to their masters, with a promise to meet up again soon.

Ben also came back and was always happy to go to the market.

Moral: Do not wait for others to express your discomfort, take the first step and you will find many to support you.

About Think n Ink: 

Learnhive is running Think n Ink Contest for Kids aged 5 – 15. Encourage your children to participate. You can register for Free! The prizes will be given in 4 categories and the best original written piece will win cash prizes and certificates. Closing date for this contest is May 22nd, 2013.

Sign up for free, participate, and win prizes by clicking here.

Think n Ink Contest- Learnhive Summer Contest 2013

4 comments on “Short Story by a First Grader

  1. Kerry Jude Curtis on said:

    Thanks I like the small story keep it up. God bless.

  2. Nelson Almeida on said:

    We are proud of your efforts son. Good Story and excellent presentation. wishing you all the best.

  3. Srinivas T J on said:

    Good Story, simple but with great meaning

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